The unfinished Odyssey
This is originally a post from my other blog," For the New Life"
but with some changes...I'm posting it here coz, I felt this is the right place for this piece...
Prologue: November 19th, 2005. A day that cannot be forgotten. Not because there was an event on the cruise "Odyssey-II", but because of something else...something unknown...something agitating...atleast, he felt that way...
Stood on the Odyssey, a restless soul...at the hour of 1:30 in the nite...staring deep into the horizon...streaching his sight as far as the blue water and the dark sky kiss each other...deeply into a train of thought...I knew what he was thinking...what he has lost in the past few years...he now doesnt care of what he gained... coz, itz worth nothing before what he has lost...his brown eyes shredded a tear...
can I say he has lost it? coz it never used to be his...he knew it too...but he was not ready to accept it...accept the truth...here comes the desire...he still wants the thing to come back to him... although some where deep in his heart he felt he was not going to get her...yeah, it was a she...the girl he loved so deeply...the girl who didnt care for his emotions...the girl who didnt know she left a deep wound in his heart...or didnt care though she did...but he wants her so deeply, madly and badly...he needs her more than he wants her...but there is no way she could know it...or she could care...
will his wound heal? will it stop hurting before it bleeds again? will the girl come back to him? lots of questions...with no answers...no one knows...the time has all the answers...does it have mercy too? again, no one knows...until then...the odyssey is not over yet...
Epilogue: Then there blinked a light far away, green in colour, like a message from the profound blue water and deep dark sky...it seemed to him a Ray of Hope...
but with some changes...I'm posting it here coz, I felt this is the right place for this piece...
Prologue: November 19th, 2005. A day that cannot be forgotten. Not because there was an event on the cruise "Odyssey-II", but because of something else...something unknown...something agitating...atleast, he felt that way...
Stood on the Odyssey, a restless soul...at the hour of 1:30 in the nite...staring deep into the horizon...streaching his sight as far as the blue water and the dark sky kiss each other...deeply into a train of thought...I knew what he was thinking...what he has lost in the past few years...he now doesnt care of what he gained... coz, itz worth nothing before what he has lost...his brown eyes shredded a tear...
can I say he has lost it? coz it never used to be his...he knew it too...but he was not ready to accept it...accept the truth...here comes the desire...he still wants the thing to come back to him... although some where deep in his heart he felt he was not going to get her...yeah, it was a she...the girl he loved so deeply...the girl who didnt care for his emotions...the girl who didnt know she left a deep wound in his heart...or didnt care though she did...but he wants her so deeply, madly and badly...he needs her more than he wants her...but there is no way she could know it...or she could care...
will his wound heal? will it stop hurting before it bleeds again? will the girl come back to him? lots of questions...with no answers...no one knows...the time has all the answers...does it have mercy too? again, no one knows...until then...the odyssey is not over yet...
Epilogue: Then there blinked a light far away, green in colour, like a message from the profound blue water and deep dark sky...it seemed to him a Ray of Hope...
posted by Chaits at 2:11 PM
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